The ultimate feeling of love.

what love got to do (lol)

Beautiful, as always, Mel!

A beautiful poem, Melody.

The sweet of love

Hi Melody! this another lovely poem.

Beautiful and moving work.

Christine

Beautifully structured, lovely poem.

its like a marriage vow!!!

Very nicely written and done with such feeling.

that was awesome!

Very glad to see you trying your hand at form. This is very similar to the lanturne, which uses syllables in this pattern not words. But, this is a very good job. Myself, I would have stayed away from abstractions. Thanks for sharing, and have a good day.

I like the format. It worked very well.

A new format for me but well written.

that was unique.. nice message too..

That was very nice:=)Great job Melody.
Monica.

Beautiful poem! Thanks for your support.

This is lovely. I enjoyed following the flow of your poem. Thanks for sharing.

So sweet Melody.

Your poem is really sweet, and I like the 1 word, 2 word thing happening.

My best to you,
Momma Tells

It is soothing and harmonious. I like it.

This is a beautiful poem,
and very nice style (:

I like it,too

Nice poem. I’ll try this pattern. I guess the cinquain I encountered was old fashioned. It goes like this: first line is one word, the title; 2nd line is about two words that describe the title; third line, 3 action words; the 4th line , four words expressing a feeling; and finally the fifth line is the 1 word title again. I enjoyed your poem. Its good to know cinquain can be flexible. God bless

Beautiful poem!

Beautiful poem of love and committment to each other. I enjoyed reading it.

Very playful, and interesting form!

i love the message… well done!

what a unique style in writing:) i enjoyed it:)

Nice and sweet. ~peace~

Very sweet!

The ultimate nature of a divine Reality called love. Very True.