This city, once unbreakable

now lingers, hanging in the balance

stripped down by mind controlling flames

turned away in the evening rains

memories layer the walls

but they rarely speak anymore

derisive bodies still crowd the floor

never destined for the morgue

time stands still here

the broken sky, my scars

the breath on the wind braces no calls

just shattered pleas of victims

spreading their lives like disease

tattered offerings of childhood dreams

haunted and drowned right on through

most never even lay on these callous roads

this is the ghostly ruins of a place i once called home

but don’t let the remains fool you

trick you into their manipulative arms

and their twisted lies that drip down from dead branches

cutting through your surface of flesh

in flashback knives of recollection

the stalkers, the offenders

they still cling here in shadows

the ones that dart across the floor

the ones that greet the corners of your eye

skim across your brain and wave goodbye

in life they may have formed something reasonably human

here the horid truth casting shapes

the squelching desires, the fangs, the claws

feeding your fear like every single night of your life

forever stuck reliving what happened here

treading their filth across the entrance

of the only house in the area still left standing

the grand white house that once caged me in

drove my every smile retreating deep within

this is where they greet, old friends of evil

still fresh enemies of mine

my veins travelling, consuming like vines

there was never hope of escape

this death fire is all in my mind

and the crawling demons

still follow me, my shadows for all my life

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Comments (21)
  • Atanacio on Jun 3, 2010

    very dark and telling a good write Shadow

  • babygirl3605 on Jun 3, 2010

    nice job

  • ashan1614 on Jun 3, 2010

    Still waiting for a “smiley, happy poem” from you. :) This is good, nevertheless.

  • ceegirl on Jun 3, 2010

    lovely poetry

  • Tom Woodside on Jun 3, 2010

    great write!

    it’s all to daunting a place to visit
    the confines of one’s mind
    who readily rewinds
    hoping to find a place of salvation
    yet, only demorilization
    is presently available in hell.

  • cardy on Jun 3, 2010

    Very deep haunting lines my friend a great write!

  • VTech on Jun 3, 2010

    good post

  • giftarist on Jun 3, 2010

    Great piece. :)

  • Tulan on Jun 3, 2010

    Our minds are shadowed with hidden recesses then even we don’t know the half of.

  • rajaryanme on Jun 4, 2010

    You penned it really well.

  • Anuradha Ramkumar on Jun 4, 2010

    Neat writing.

  • My4everscotland on Jun 4, 2010

    Great write Shadow, though advice is good thing for a writer, I love your style, so don’t ever change

  • Jimmy Shilaho on Jun 4, 2010

    A very good write.

  • flowerrose on Jun 4, 2010

    good post, keep on working, thanks

  • bestone on Jun 5, 2010

    great post

  • yes me on Jun 6, 2010

    Great pace, flow, and imagery cheers.

  • shadysdevil on Jun 6, 2010

    Wow, simply amazing!! I love how deep and how much emotion you feel when reading yr work!!

  • lillyrose on Jun 7, 2010

    You have a very imaginative mind, I think you should write a juicy horror story! this was brilliant!!!!! :-)

  • priyaa on Jun 7, 2010

    Very deep thought presented in the post thanks.

  • sara20 on Jun 7, 2010

    Excellent manner and very well-written sentence is doing, with useful information includes a good things you have in your article.

    Thanks and cheers.
    Sara

  • Aardaerimus on Jun 9, 2010

    Wow… If you’re anything like me, writings like this come from dark times of the heart. Very deep and very foreboding. A great write, though I sincerely hope it’s not a reflection of what you’re going through. It’s better to have nothing to write about than to suffer the things that often give us dark inspiration.

    Still, well written. :-)

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