A nice poem.

Clean My life!

Having problems every day its just the start.

Starring its not easy, finishing a problem its not easy either.

Trying to change by our own its not helping, opinions are poison to my body.

Life its short, never know whats going to happen in your next second.

Clean my life oh Lord, my God, my saviour.

Clean my life before my heart beats fails, make me new, make me over again, make me somebody Lord.

Recognizing that I’m doing the wright its just the beginning, recognizing the wrong its the end.

Hurricanes are keep going, standing by my own its not easy, trusting someone is hard.

Losing my soul its going to be the end, I’m who I am but you can change me, let me shadow you Lord- I just want to trace your line.

Oh Lord play my background like a piano instrument, be passion with me, let me conference my life to you, being proud of my mistakes, its just the begging.

 
Trusting you oh Lord, your my cheaper every day I wake up, I just want to say Lord.

Clean…clean my life!

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  • Saundra Morgan on Feb 10, 2011

    Hey, this is good! And I echo the sentiments of this poem…..change me oh God! This might could be put to music and a good song come out of it!

  • Cubanboy111 on Feb 10, 2011

    really well thank you! :)

  • JadeLuv on Feb 15, 2011

    Great share!! Make sure you use apostrophe’s where you need them when you are typing its and meaning it is it should be it’s. Keep up the great work.

    Jade

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