Depression determined to twist my psyche.

Skeleton brittle blistered by the Sun’s twisted psyche. 

Every thought consumed in total annihilation. 

He does not want even my thoughts to remain. 

He wants to wipe the slate clean.

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  • Guy Hogan on Nov 3, 2009

    A poem of absolute destruction. What is the solution?

  • ceegirl on Nov 3, 2009

    great poem

  • TroostAvenue on Nov 3, 2009

    Don’t understand first line but I recognize the other three. Think you describe a place I’ve been.

  • Liane Schmidt on Nov 4, 2009

    Quite powerful work.

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

  • Darla Smith on Nov 4, 2009

    Very nice poem.

  • diamondpoet on Nov 4, 2009

    That was very deep, nice pic.

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