In the heat of a fever

I feel my life will come to an end.

All those times of carefree,

Finally had their heroic fees.

Assess me for my good service to my fellowmen.

 

Cleanse my soul and free me from my agony

 

My death is not worth living for, if my sins have not yet obliterated.

 

It was not my fault of killing my enemies

 

They were the menace of our country

 

I killed them, especially those who fought with their twisted beliefs

 

And those who usurped our country’s territory

 

Spare me for the brutal killings! I did all of them not because of my personal greed

 

But because of my service and unconditional love

 

To my fellowmen in particular and to my country in general

 

And to my country, my death is worth remembering–just for the service

 

Money is nothing; it can’t be bought with happiness that I deserved till death,

 

My service is heartily dedicated to your country and my beloved country

 

In the heat of a fever

 

I feel my life will come to an end.

All those times of carefree,

Finally had their heroic fees.

What is the purpose of this death?

I asked myself one day,

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  • abegail alino on Jul 6, 2011

    before our death comes,we must confess our sins! God will cleanse our soul and we will be free from any pain and guilt.start now confessing because we don’t know what the future holds.

  • Lizette AƱabeza on Jul 8, 2011

    Only Jesus can cleanse us completely.

  • Saneth Gerodias on Jul 10, 2011

    Only God can make our hearts and soul cleanse from all the sins that we committed. He alone knows how to forgive and heal everything in our life, trust fully God.

  • Claudine faith Sabanico on Jul 10, 2011

    We don’t know when our death come,we must be prepare for this.Even though we are sinners, I know that god will forgive us if we have faith on him.

  • logena bihag on Jul 12, 2011

    Human as we are are mortal. Meaning, anytime we will die.So, as of now, we must prepare ourselves.Repenting and forgiving is essential.

  • sabalande on Jul 13, 2011

    Oh! what a command!We let God cleanse our soul and free us from agony without saying please.Even we are sinners, we still have a thick faces to ask about about our needs.In return, He responded us .Starting from now, we should be thankful and repent our sins.

  • lovelydelima on Jul 14, 2011

    We must be prepared for our time to leave this world because we all know we only borrowed this life from God.

  • Maricher Vismanos on Jul 15, 2011

    We don\’t know when our death comes we have to clean our sins and we always prepared our self always.

  • Vincent M Georpe on Jul 15, 2011

    We will do right things and in general we should know and follow the law of the GOD so that He will cleanszew

  • marielbonghanoy on Jul 15, 2011

    God will one day hold us each accountable for all the things He created for us to enjoy, but we refused to do so.

  • realou_gabison on Jul 17, 2011

    we are afraid to die because of our sins.but confessed him and he will cleanse us.And he will forget all your sins.

  • mark navales on Jul 17, 2011

    We must ask forgiveness to our God,so he will be cleanse our sins.

  • annabelle f.linawan on Jul 19, 2011

    You have plenty of time to make your soul clean,confess everything that you’ve done in your life and surrender yourself to GOD…dont waste time.

  • vanesa besera on Jul 20, 2011

    we should believe our God,because he is the only one who can save us from our sins.

  • Nerlyn Bastida on Jul 29, 2011

    As a christian we already know that JESUS CHRIST save us from the sin and cleanse our soul.. But it’s hard to accept that we are still prison in our own agony.. but don’t afraid to call him for he is always there to comfort us..

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