Written when I tried fasting.

It was a cleanup time
for the body and mind,
a big battle for rebirth,
a delicious pain to assert
that I could descend
into hell and come back
alive . . . the test I survived
better than any lectures combined!

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  • Justfer on Nov 27, 2008

    a big battle for rebirth, a delicious pain to assert…wow.

  • loafer on Nov 28, 2008

    Good aesthetic sense, thanks!

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