Subtle Little Shift.

photo: The KD Peace Rose

Closer now, than yesterday,

my heart can feel the call;

of love that’s coming to me,

from out beyond the wall.

It whispers my name softly,

and tells me of her love;

bids me fly straight to her arms,

fleetingly, like a dove.

I in hesitation held,

stubborn in this, my cell;

for though I longed to be free,

I kept my heart in hell.

She sang to me her soft song,

of love that would not end;

but, obstinace was my shield,

and I’m alone again.

And, as I stood there weary,

my spirit wracked with pain;

I heard that voice soft calling,

and begging me to change.

The power of that love song,

broke down those mighty walls;

and, now, just another man,

I freely heed her call.

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  • s j tubrazy on Jan 15, 2011

    nice piece of share.

  • Jimmy Shilaho on Jan 15, 2011

    Very powerful as usual. The best writing comes when we are in love I suppose.

  • Joie Schmidt on Jan 15, 2011

    So beautiful.

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Joie Schmidt.

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