A poem written on the north coast of Cornwall.

At home I seldom notice the sky.
My view is obscured by buildings
And the fussy furniture of urban sprawl.
With no room for vision
I forget to lift my eyes to the sky.
It is remote, fragmented, unreachable.
Light diminishes the night; no stars now
Just impenetrable fear.

Here on the edge, the sky engulfs me.
It reaches down to dance on the sea
It caresses the cliffs and dances
Across the windswept fields.
I could run to the top of the cliff
And reach up to the clouds as they glide along.
Night enriches the sky; sunsets then stars
Draw the eye heavenward.

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Comments (9)
  • giftarist on Nov 5, 2009

    Nice piece, enjoyed read..I like the pic too.

  • Christine Ramsay on Nov 5, 2009

    That is such a beautiful piece. I love looking at the sky especially at night.

    Christine

  • Teves on Nov 5, 2009

    Great poem frances…

  • Sharif Ishnin on Nov 5, 2009

    Very pleasing to read this.Very good poetry.;)

  • lillyrose on Nov 5, 2009

    Excellent writing, so glad to have the pleasure in reading it!

  • Tracey Parece on Nov 5, 2009

    Wonderful poem. You made me feel as though I were there with you. Have a great day.

  • PhoenixRox on Nov 6, 2009

    A precious piece. I love looking at the star studded sky.Thanks for sharing!

  • LOVELYHONEY on Nov 12, 2009

    come out into the wilderness with me

    i promise you i shall show you GOD

    in his myriads of manifestation

    and forms

    lovely

  • simplyoj on Nov 14, 2009

    Nice one Frances. Breathtaking image too!

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