Clouds (Haiku)

Angelji on Dec 9, 2011

Tags: away, clouds, floating, Happiness, light

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Someone said, heavy hearts like heavy clouds in the sky, one best relieved by letting of a little water.

I feel so light

Clouds covering my happiness from me

Slowly floating away.

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Comments (11)

Yvhes P. on Dec 9, 2011
very nice as usual =)
mphsglo on Dec 9, 2011
Yvhes P. stole my words. Yes, it is very nice.
Aroosa Gloomy on Dec 9, 2011
as they floating away my happiness also fading with them:(
Aroosa Gloomy on Dec 9, 2011
as they floating away my happiness also fading with them:(
FX777222999 on Dec 9, 2011
Wonderful poem.
pattiann on Dec 9, 2011
Beautiful!
Vivek Ratan on Dec 9, 2011
excellent share,Angelji
erwinkennythomas on Dec 9, 2011
clouds of hope
Budy236 on Dec 9, 2011
Ha! Awesome!!! I love it!
ittech on Dec 10, 2011
Clouds covering my happiness from me

why great thought within the semantic
Angelji on Dec 10, 2011
Thanks a lot Friends;)) Yvess , Aroosa G, Fx , Erwin , Budy , Vivek , Pattian , Ittechil…Mpsgo .

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