Coconut Ocean

wonder on Nov 13, 2009

Could be there in the new version of the atlas.

The water front is peopled

Swimming bathing and all

There’s no privacy

Leave alone a protocol.

The flourishing dams and sluice gates

They arise from the seams

Mercilessly they cut across

They slice rivers and streams.

Nature’s beauty oh today

No more casts a spell

That’s the sad story, oh no!

I narrate in a coconut shell.

But the waters will no more take

This assault lying down

They’ll outdo the bridges and the dams

And soar above the city and the town.

I suggest this package tour

Absolutely free of cost

But if you’re loathe to climb a coconut tree

All the fun is lost.

Before you venture upwards

Do carry your mobile

Curiosity is gripping!

Do keep me posted all the while.

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Comments (19)

drelayaraja on Nov 13, 2009
Good article. Great picture. I like it.
Teves on Nov 13, 2009
Great work. Keep sharing.
Priyanka Bhowmick on Nov 14, 2009
dats an excellent composition… fine penned.
Alexiandria M Michaels on Nov 14, 2009
very interesting, enjoyed reading it!
ken bultman on Nov 14, 2009
What a gorgeious painting from a talented brush and an imaginative, creative mind. The poem began a bit on the ominous side but ended with me wanting to ascend the nearest coconut palm. There is definitely a Coconut Ocean in my new atlas.
goindia on Nov 14, 2009
Great work dear. I liked the views….

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Annashank on Nov 14, 2009
A beautiful write!!! I love the picture
chitragopi on Nov 14, 2009
Lovely picture of the coconut and an interesting poem.
cutedrishti8 on Nov 14, 2009
Great piece of work..A great hand made picture…
abhishek40914 on Nov 14, 2009
good post
Sukhdarshan on Nov 14, 2009
Excellent write with a beautiful painting…keep posting.
K.Reshma on Nov 14, 2009
Very interesting
Pinaki Ghosh on Nov 14, 2009
nice piece of work.
Starpisces on Nov 14, 2009
good poem with good painting again, Wonder, your are wonderful
Frances Lawrence on Nov 14, 2009
Very creative, and I loved the picture too
John Watson on Nov 15, 2009
I LIKE IT!
Eunice Tan on Nov 15, 2009
Beautifully written.
Jane Jane on Nov 21, 2009
I like your painting.
Authoress Terry E. Lyle on Nov 22, 2009
Awesome detail, and a wonderful title. “Coconut Ocean”

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