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To my son, age five, I gave

A string-drawn sack in which he’d save

Important things to little boys;

And fill to brim such vital choice.

Within this sack, collections formed:

Of crayon nubs, socks well-worn,

Dried skins of snakes, and spider’s web,

Inflating needle and Barbie’s leg;

The tooth from a deer, an autumn leaf,

Hardened gum (stuck underneath);

A rock, or two, shines mica bright;

A bug that only lights at night;

Fishing hook with spools of line,

A baseball, clean, that once was mine;

Cocoon of unknown origin,

A slipper that had lost its twin;

A picture of his siblings, four;

A slightly dried-up apple core;

Three snowflakes from this year’s winter;

That evil wand that renders splinters;

A lock of someone else’s hair,

And eyes from his first Teddy Bear;

Little, tiny scrap of rope,

Tied about a chip of soap;

A Matchbox car with just two wheels,

Five pennies no one dares to steal;

A paper-clip that’s still unspoiled;

A fist-sized ball of aluminum foil.

All such things—so meaningful,

In burlap sack with cord tight-pulled.

I wondered then, if I possessed,

A sim’lar sack or treasure chest;

Perhaps my pen would be a start…

Paper, wine and a broken heart.

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  • Morgana on Jul 4, 2009

    Reminds me of the treasures my little niece hides. lol Lovely poem, Fegger, very enjoyable as always.

  • BullwinkleMuse on Jul 4, 2009

    Remember to include some moose droppings in that sack, brother, and save me some of that wine.

  • Katie Marie on Jul 5, 2009

    Need to pull out those things from time to time to remember why they had value. I think my collecting bag is called a journal now, though I do tend to hord the memorable trinkets too.

  • Duff D Moss on Jul 5, 2009

    Bloody hell – what a motto to end off with. I really liked the analogy to our bigger boy selves.

  • cafftee on Jul 5, 2009

    Charming, enchanting, whimsical and a little melancholic flourish at the end. Beautifully done as always.

  • ellenhart on Jul 5, 2009

    loved it

  • Tate Morgan on Jul 7, 2009

    Fegger
    I can\’t imagine you the soul.
    That creates such literary treasure.
    The heart that beams is so grand.
    It sees what we can\’t measure.

    If ever there was a man so great.
    That I had once lent my ear to.
    Thoughts that so mirrored my own.
    Would have to think he be to you.

    So find in yourself that goodness.
    That makes you straight and true.
    Be careful where your shadow cast.
    For he is always watching you.

    A special bond are father and son.
    As daughters marry to move away.
    A boy always remembers the lessons.
    Shared with his dad along the way.

    As poet and a fellow traveler.
    Keep the hand upon the wheel.
    Steer your course by the stars.
    That teach us to love and feel.
    Tate

  • spiritwalker on Jul 9, 2009

    oh Fegger…what beautiful noise your soul makes.

  • Andrew Davies on Jul 10, 2009

    Fegger, that felt very Shel Silverstein.

  • kcpeacock on Jul 12, 2009

    I like this. I have a nine year old and he has a “sack” of his own. As I read this I can see him collecting things around the house.

  • tenderpoison on Jul 17, 2009

    ah..as the mother of five…I am familiar with these magic sacks, if only we could hold their sense of wonder and enchantment, loving such simple, uncomplicated things…but we cling to something darker…you might be becoming my favorite poet…

  • kate smedley on Jul 21, 2009

    That’s a wonderful poem … I love the way you closed it.

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