Everyone says you don’t matter… you don’t belong… I don’t love you…

A fictional girl

and an imaginary world

There, a whispery white ghost cries

a paper soul departs this life

Her heart lies on the floor

cold and black, as her mind begins to fade

her eyes no longer twinkle

All alone, without a thing to

break her fall

nothing at all but the pillow

she clings to

Drenched in rain as it flows, softly, from her eyes

The low tones of music

overpowering her screams

as she waits for someone who never was there

Turned to cold to shelter her pain from the world

she drowns in darkness as back as her eyes

Fear consumes her wasted life

no prayer can save you this time

Only to live another day

in someone else’s eyes

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  • Elijah99 on Mar 27, 2010

    Idk about you but I think this is an awesome poem. From what I took from it is the anguish and despare of a broken heart. If I had a prize you would have one it.

  • Shamyl on Mar 27, 2010

    I love this line ‘Fear consumes her wasted life.’
    Another very good poem.

  • ShadowPsychos on Apr 11, 2010

    another awesome one…i like this one the best…so far lol…i could read your poems all day :)

  • TwiKnight on May 9, 2010

    AWESOME write, mate! Creepy, but awesome!

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