Breaking free from a harmful grip.

Ever fast. Your grip on me. Cold, calculating, cruel.

Shackled soul.  Will struggle free. Must find help, a sharp tool.

Hammer down. Smashing hard, cold chains.

Freedom close, gasping for breath, now self-preservation reigns.

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  • Fresh Writing on Apr 4, 2009

    Very romantic! Excellent structure…

    Warm regards,

    -Fresh Writing

  • Luffy12 on Apr 5, 2009

    ouch! add me on Stumble Upon pls! Luffy_12

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