Cold Shower

Steven West on Mar 4, 2010

Humorous poem about taking a cold shower.

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Hot water heater is on the fritz.

Cold shower is in store.

It’s cold enough outside.

I don’t want cold anymore.

Water hits my body

Like icicles on my breath.

One more sprinkle from my cold shower,

And I’ll feel like sudden death.

The plumber will fix the problem.

The cold shower will go away.

But I’ll feel so much better,

When the month turns into May.

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Comments (9)

K V Venkataramana on Mar 4, 2010
Nice poem.
seema1962 on Mar 4, 2010
Very nice.
8Shei8 on Mar 4, 2010
I don’t think I can take a cold shower.
pen2010 on Mar 4, 2010
very good post
Christine Ramsay on Mar 4, 2010
You’re brave. I wouldn’t go near the shower if it was cold. A good piece.

Christine
sara2010 on Mar 4, 2010
Good poem
Darla Cooke on Mar 4, 2010
I would never have the nerve to take a cold shower.
hfj on Mar 4, 2010
Heat water and take a warm bath. Problem solved. Good poem though.
SunAhuja on Mar 5, 2010
Out of Good, Better & Best, This is Best one. Nice post.

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