One of my shorter poems that I wrote a while back, but thought I would share anyway. Hope you enjoy!

She stands out there in the pouring rain
waiting for her one true prince to come.
He is riding into town on a one horse train
vowing to always stay.
But what would happen when those two souls finally collide?
Will they intermingle and intertwine,
or will they part separate ways?
What if all they were hoping for were turned into mere illusion
and what they had could never be real?
What if it changed the course of their ultimate being,
For if they were to meet,
Both souls would just evaporate into thin air

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  • kate smedley on Mar 28, 2009

    I enjoyed this as I do with all of your work.

  • Christine Ramsay on Mar 28, 2009

    An interesting poem. You never know what will happen when two people meet.

    Christine

  • T.Rex McGoogle on Mar 28, 2009

    Very thought provoking and passionate. I like your writing!
    interesting, interesting

  • Will Gray on Mar 28, 2009

    Good write!

  • Jo Oliver on Mar 28, 2009

    love the unreal expectation element

  • Joie Schmidt on Mar 28, 2009

    Beautiful and magical*

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

  • MrZebra84 on Mar 28, 2009

    very interesting and unique, nice work.

  • papaleng on Mar 29, 2009

    whether it’s short or long, your poems are worth reading.

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