Colorblind

Lady Sunshine on Jan 18, 2010

Tags: blond, blue eyes, Boy, Color, colorblind, dark brown eyes, Galford, girl, love, Nakoruru, Raven-Haired, Samurai Shodown

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Love is colorblind.

Dark brown eyes sees blue
Raven-haired girl meets blond boy
Love knows no color

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Comments (17)

Christine Ramsay on Jan 18, 2010
A colourful haiku. well done.

Christine
Kris Tagre on Jan 18, 2010
its really amazing how short but poignant a haiku can be..wonderful..(”,)
Atanacio on Jan 18, 2010
this was so cute
ken bultman on Jan 18, 2010
Very nice. A Crayola-like haiku of romance.
Mickey Pig Knuckles on Jan 18, 2010
Wow Lady Sunshine, You are so wonderfully gifted and I am so Honored to have this chance to expose myself to your amazing writings. Love this haiku by You…

Mickey Pig Knuckles
Guy Hogan on Jan 18, 2010
Haiku is becoming my favorite form of poetry. No, that’s not true. Your haiku poems are becoming my favorite form of poetry.
Val Mills on Jan 18, 2010
Enjoyed this, nice write using the picture. The eyes tell all.
standingproud on Jan 18, 2010
love knows no colour
beautiful Lady Sunshine
Shirley Shuler on Jan 18, 2010
Hi Lady Sunshine, you are so right, love is colorblind, love knows no color, beautiful haiku!!
VTech on Jan 18, 2010
lovely
AlmaG on Jan 18, 2010
This is so true LS! color and race doesn’t matter to love.
Linda Lori on Jan 19, 2010
Well said!
fragile18 on Jan 19, 2010
nice one
giftarist on Jan 19, 2010
Colourful haiku.
deep blue on Jan 19, 2010
Nice haiku. It sure does, love is not color blind but literally blind.
Tmrobotix on Jan 20, 2010
I think they’re so difficult to make and still I’ve saw 2 persons making perfect ones, you’re one of them!

Awesome poem and so true, sadly love is blind.
I hate being the blind fool I can be when I’m in love.
Melody SJAL on Jan 21, 2010
Simply wonderful, love it!

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