When you walk by, I feel like the candy coated m&ms melting on a hot summer day…

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Pick a color of your favorite m&m candy,

is it red, yellow ,green or even a orange?

Is it the plain, peanut butter or even almond,

chose your  favorite among the given flavors.

(.)

I feel like the m&m candy every time I see you,

I  melt and it isn’t in your mouth as the ad says.

My candy coating shell cracks in to many pieces,

and all you have to do is take me in your arms.

(.)

My blue eyes spots you walking towards me baby,

I want to clear a path so you can reach me faster.

Lets not talk about the emails that fly like kites,

they say what is needed when we are not together.

(.)

I reaize that my life has changed since I met you baby,

is the sun brighter or the sky bluer now that you love me?

Which ever it is I want to bottle it and give it to you darling,

for a love this strong doesn’t  come along everyday we know.

(.)

You take me in your arms and give me kisses that have fire,

my body respondes without any pursuation of any kind baby.

Do you have the time to quench the fire you and I started,

if not I wil wait untill I see you tonight behind closed doors.

(.)

For I know that I am in love with you and you say the same,

this is not childs play and definatly not for the faint of heart.

But a emotion that rocks every fiber of my body that you touch,

and I am very glad that it was you that taught me that lesson.

(.)

I have to go to work now and you are on your way to work to,

So I give you a passionate kiss goodbye untill we meet again.

Here is the key to my front door and to my heart that I made you,

for it is yours forever and welcome to open anytime you want to.

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  • mrsjones on Mar 3, 2009

    A nicey writen expression of love,well done.You must have loved someone with all your heart to write this.A love that that dont come around every day.

  • C LEBLANC on Mar 3, 2009

    beautiful

  • Nadir on Mar 3, 2009

    I am m&m candy crazy. Thanks for the added value. They will taste different now.! The packet will have a different meaning too.!!

  • hfj on Mar 3, 2009

    Someone is smitten by love bad. Very expressive and passionate piece. Sounds like your man likes m&m’s. Well done.

  • Timothy P Stavert on Mar 3, 2009

    Well done Payge you certainly gave me an apetite for M&M and passionate loving

    Tim

  • Christine Ramsay on Mar 3, 2009

    Such a romantic poem payge. I will never see M&Ms in the same light again.

    Christine

  • Kimber777 on Mar 3, 2009

    Sweet as candy:)

  • Joie Schmidt on Mar 3, 2009

    Sweet poem – thank you for sharing!

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

  • George W Whitehead on Mar 4, 2009

    A tastefully done article, payge!

  • King Coil on Mar 4, 2009

    A nice poem with colorfully phrased emotions and it is driven by
    a love in you that is still alive!

  • papaleng on Mar 4, 2009

    My friend, you really are improving by miles. this is so sweet and well-written.

  • Mr Ghaz on Mar 6, 2009

    Bravo! That was lovely poem! I loved it! Thanx 4 sharing.

  • S A JOHNSON on Mar 12, 2009

    Very clever and wonderfully written.

  • kate smedley on Mar 14, 2009

    Such a beautiful poem, I love the imagery with the M&Ms, lovely touch.

  • poeticseraphim on Mar 20, 2009

    Very good.

    I mean VERY good:-)!!

    I love ‘emails that fly like kites’

    @When you walk by i feel like candy covered m7ms melting on a hot summers day’… :-) great line:-) GREAT LINE!

    Great love poem :-)

    I want a copy of this to read over and over:-)

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