When your emotions swirl and surge beyond your capacity to handle pain. .

I can’t cease the storm that rages inside me

I can’t rip the turmoil that won’t let me be

My heart rate speeds up

Cold sweat drips abhorrently

I can’t contain it; my chest is about to erupt

Whilst the rest of my ravaged body proceeds to writhe and seethe

I’ve never felt a pain so bold

Frostbite rots through a soul so cold

I must scream so I can escape

But no one can hear me where I lie

My core is excruciatingly damaged out of shape

Breath leaves my empty lungs in a hollow sigh

I don’t know what to do anymore

My foot’s at the door but it falls through the floor

I feel the pain pulse to my head

As I lie embedded to my sheets in my bed

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