When your emotions swirl and surge beyond your capacity to handle pain. .
I can’t cease the storm that rages inside me
I can’t rip the turmoil that won’t let me be
My heart rate speeds up
Cold sweat drips abhorrently
I can’t contain it; my chest is about to erupt
Whilst the rest of my ravaged body proceeds to writhe and seethe
I’ve never felt a pain so bold
Frostbite rots through a soul so cold
I must scream so I can escape
But no one can hear me where I lie
My core is excruciatingly damaged out of shape
Breath leaves my empty lungs in a hollow sigh
I don’t know what to do anymore
My foot’s at the door but it falls through the floor
I feel the pain pulse to my head
As I lie embedded to my sheets in my bed
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