The view is so good from here.

I just love when I take a ride with you,

I just love your body, such a wonderful view.

Your body so sleek, and your body so fine,

It looks just perfect when entangled with mines.

Your wings spread apart so the air can flow good,

Your cock pit is so warm and as smooth as new wood.

Your p.a. system is working fine and is up to the job,

All systems are ready and here comes the rod!

I plug into your systems and everything is ok,

The p.a.system comes on and verifys it that way.

We fly up a little and down to the ground,

I think we hit some turbulence, I like how that sounds!

Because it’s a rough ride and all systems are go,

We go up and then down, in and out, well you know.

Finally the plane settles down and I begin to depart,

We are at out destination again where we had are start.

So fly the friendly skies and fly them with me,

It will be a hell of a trip and a ride you will see.

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Comments (15)
  • Cathy Saunders on Jun 1, 2009

    Good work. I liked it.

  • clay hurtubise on Jun 1, 2009

    lol, one trip I think I’ll pass on!
    Thanks,
    Clay

  • Littlekid137 on Jun 1, 2009

    Wow that was a great one my friend!

  • LOVELYHONEY on Jun 1, 2009

    marvellous ,

    what a trip in air,

    i think no one can despair ,

    all hair will bare ,

    all joysticks will fix

    triond will not be able to refix ,

    as u fly in the thickest of jungles ,

    the plane will crash,

    if u bungle,

    so hold on till you burst

    and both of u

    quench ur thirst.

  • Darla Cooke on Jun 1, 2009

    I love your poems! They are always very interesting to read.

  • Tracy Wootten on Jun 1, 2009

    This is very interesting – dont think i have read anything like it before,very clever. Will definately be reading more of your work.

  • sandie on Jun 1, 2009

    Very good, you can take it two ways depending on how your mind works.Very clever.

  • QueenZee on Jun 1, 2009

    Great poetry…

  • Joie Schmidt on Jun 1, 2009

    A fun, unique poem!*

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

  • rutherfranc on Jun 1, 2009

    I heard an explosion in the end.. was there a crash?

  • skylite on Jun 1, 2009

    Great One !!

  • Princess Dre on Jun 3, 2009

    That was something..definitely different – fan/friend – Princess

  • nekkoli on Jun 4, 2009

    I like!

  • hfj on Jun 4, 2009

    You’re slogan for your airline should read, “ladies only”. Hot stuff man.

  • Bo Russo on Jun 6, 2009

    Alright Top,that was GOOD!! Very creative,excellent anologies,and funny too.

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