A poem.

My evaluation brings complication.

So many problems I sit here facing.

No time to think, just make the choice

Tomorrow comes and lights a torch

One down, and a million to go

A ten mile walk, in three feet of snow

A flashback fades out, a new one flicks in

If you’re wondering what is about to begin,

Just have a seat, kick back and relax

It’s just my life, in a short little stack

The opinion is mine, please don’t attack

To each his own, and I hope you come back

Beyond the stars the moon strikes your eye

You take a look at my profile, why?

So many real and unique tales

With a love for art that is so profound.

In time, my life will all be unveiled

Until the end, my ship of stories shall sail. 

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  • Atanacio on Oct 14, 2009

    this was a good read :) wow

  • Michael Degenhardt on Oct 14, 2009

    It seems to speak of the person as one who has so much going on, almost complex yet simple in the fact that it’s this person’s life, so get used to it and relax and enjoy. Very well written. Michael

  • ken bultman on Oct 14, 2009

    Your ship is sailing now. Don’t let it sink.

  • Will Dee on Oct 14, 2009

    Thanks for the wonderful read and boat trip :-)

  • cardy on Oct 14, 2009

    You sound like you have a lot on you’re mind, a lovely poem from you.

  • giftarist on Oct 14, 2009

    Lovely piece.. great read..

  • Sourav on Oct 14, 2009

    Very well written poem and a lovely title!

  • Tanya Wallace on Oct 14, 2009

    Loved it!Excellent write Dena! very cleverly crafted poem and the ending tied it together beautifully!

  • alc on Jan 13, 2010

    Thanks for the share! I enjoyed the read!

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