Come, Take a Break

Starpisces on Mar 15, 2011

Tags: break, coffee, hardworking, Rest, work

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I see you work too hard, come, take a break

Have a cup of coffee and rest ten minutes

After drinking you will have more power

Then you can continue to work further

By the way, this place looks great to sit

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http://authspot.com/poetry/life-metaphors-volume-six/

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Comments (19)

Brewed Coffee on Mar 15, 2011
I just had a cup of coffee. Nice!
Eldridge on Mar 15, 2011
i think that they’re beers…
megamatt09 on Mar 15, 2011
Very good work. Thank you for sharing.
Lady Sunshine on Mar 15, 2011
That’s cute Starpisces.
galore on Mar 15, 2011
thanks for nice advise
LCM Linda on Mar 15, 2011
Star, that’s interesting. Can you reserve a seat for me? Well-done.
perezz on Mar 15, 2011
very impressive.
Eunice Tan on Mar 15, 2011
Well said
mtrguanlao on Mar 15, 2011
Lol,love the pic star! A short but great poem! Everyone needs a break! But I’d rather have my pets as my companion than those monkeys,lol!
Luna Morena on Mar 16, 2011
Hi Star!!! Great post, I love the idea of resting and having coffe, that’s the perfect moment of the day.
Jimmy Shilaho on Mar 16, 2011
That picture rocks! Thanks for the early morning smile.
SowmyaT on Mar 16, 2011
Nice
gaby7 on Mar 16, 2011
A really nice illustration!
anndavey650 on Mar 16, 2011
I think I’ll take you up on that! *laughs*
Anuradha Ramkumar on Mar 16, 2011
That was wonderful…I had my share of coffee already.
PR Mace on Mar 16, 2011
Wonderfully funny. I think I will a cup of herbal tea during my break.
Likha on Mar 17, 2011
Unique photo. I hope they enjoyed their break.
CA Johnson on Mar 21, 2011
I loved your limerick and the pic too. I love the idea of taking breaks.
Melody SJAL on Mar 26, 2011
Nice piece.

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