This years love.

Come undone
My love
Come undone

Touch me
Come down from
That hillside
Throw your arms round
My small form
Without a glance behind

Come undone
My love
Come undone

Into night’s quiet whisper
Turn toward me
Let my arms
Shelter you
Let my embrace
Let breathless sighs
Protect all that we do

Come undone
My love
Come undone

Keep me aching for more
Keep me needing only you
Keep me hoping for dreams
Made of
Only two

Come undone
My love
Come undone
With only me

Deep into twilight
Deep into heaven’s sublime slumber
When two hearts ache to part
And finally, come together

Come undone
My love
Come undone
Just you, with me

And, become one

Joie Schmidt © Copyright 2010 All Rights Reserved.

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  • rutherfranc on Apr 1, 2009

    very sensual and tempting.. it is almost like that you are casting a mystic spell on the object of your desire.. a very lovely prelude to what you wish to happen..

  • Jo Oliver on Apr 2, 2009

    Beautiful poem. Dont know if it it didnt load on my computer or there is a prob on the pg, but there isnt a video here?

  • payge on Apr 2, 2009

    A very sensual piece,but the picture or video you wanted isnt showing up.Not sure if its my pc or a upload problem.

  • KathySpring on Apr 2, 2009

    Beautiful Beautiful times a million….piece. The mystic melody you seem to slowly play with the rythm being build is like a solo violion slowly being a accompanied by another….truly a beautiful piece. WELL DONE WELL DONE

    Kathy

  • Christine Ramsay on Apr 2, 2009

    A very beautiful and romantic piece.

    Christine

  • rileyd on Apr 2, 2009

    So emotional loved it.

  • Kate Smedley on Apr 2, 2009

    Absolutely beautiful poem, quite lyrical.

  • papaleng on Apr 2, 2009

    so cute and passionate.

  • Inna Tysoe on Apr 2, 2009

    Romantic as ever.

    Inna

  • Eunice Tan on Apr 2, 2009

    Sensual and passionate. You are one of the best in this genre.

  • rajeev ibhargava on Apr 2, 2009

    i took an instant liking to this poem. i think the best tribute i can give it is in saying it is 100% professional. it has all the ingredients of a prize winner. beautiful words, flowing with sensation and passion. PURE GOLD CLASS!!

  • OhSugar on Apr 2, 2009

    Very beautiful with a clear romantic message.

    God bless,

    OhSugar

  • Alicia Wind on Apr 2, 2009

    awww…so touching, the lines and the heart of each lines make ur reader’s heart appreciate its loveliness…

  • clay hurtubise on Apr 2, 2009

    Wow girl, keep that up and I might turn straight!
    Thanks,
    Clay

  • STEVE666 on Apr 2, 2009

    A truly great piece. Perfect.

  • Papa Sparks on Apr 2, 2009

    Very lovely and evocative my friend.

  • Mr Ghaz on Apr 2, 2009

    Excellent! Great poem! That was lovely poem and touching too. I loved it! Keep it up. Well done and thanx for sharing..nice pics as well

  • CHAN LEE PENG on Apr 2, 2009

    You touch my heart again. Really good work here!

  • Poetic Enigma on Apr 2, 2009

    Very beautiful and romantic,
    Such an excellent write (:

  • NA Staffieri on Apr 2, 2009

    A very romantic love song.

  • ShaFar on Apr 2, 2009

    Beautiful! Very passionate.

  • Dee Gold on Apr 3, 2009

    very romantic

  • Will Gray on Apr 3, 2009

    Breathtaking!! You are fantastic!!!

  • kjbriand on Apr 13, 2009

    You got the stuff, Beautiful all around

  • writergirl77 on Apr 25, 2009

    I loved the way I can listen to a beautiful song at the same time that I can read your beautiful poem.. so much talent!! amazing!!!

  • Jenny Heart on Mar 25, 2010

    Breath taking and beautiful!

  • Marcin Kaminski on Feb 8, 2012

    It’s a bit difficult to buy foreign books in my country, but I’ll definitely buy yours! :)

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