Whenever I go on a trip, whether business or vacation or just a weekend get away, I am usually filled with anticipation and excitement as it nears time to leave. However, within a few days on the road, I find myself longing for familiar surroundings and comforts and looking forward to the joy of coming home. This poem speaks in agreement to those who agree that there is no place like home.

 

 

Coming Home

 

I was tired and worn

Stressed and forlorn

Needing to get away

Just to relax and play

 

I dreamed of a warm breeze

And envisioned palm trees

Were these tricks of my mind?

Or real things I could find

 

So I traveled the land

To find sunshine and sand

And determined I’d do

Nothing but rest and renew

 

But in just a little while

I found this was not my style

This costly vacation

Far across the nation

 

Still I did my best

To get plenty rest

But at vacation’s end

I couldn’t suppress a grin

 

My time in the sun

Had been lots of fun

But for home my heart yearned

And it was time I returned

 

I longed to lay my head

In my very own bed

To sit in my own chair

And breath home’s air

 

For an indulgent change of pace

Fine hotels have their place

But the best thing when I roam

Is the joy of coming home.

 

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You might also enjoy reading other poems by Lynn Hollis:

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If Only We Could Love

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Graduates – Ready to Depart

Minding My Feet

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  • Lynn Hollis on Jan 4, 2012

    Hello friends. I have been away from home for a couple of weeks, so I wrote this little poem because I am glad to be home again. I also had no internet access during that time and I found that I really missed hanging out on Triond. Now I have a lot of writing and reading to catch up on. Happy New Year!

  • ittech on Jan 4, 2012

    very nice

  • AmosTheCat on Jan 4, 2012

    Welcome back to triond land and thanks for the poem for the occasion of your return. Very nice job. Look forward to more.

  • PHILLY DREAMER on Jan 4, 2012

    I usually never want to come home on a great vacation lol, Where did you go?

  • Margaret Boseroy on Jan 4, 2012

    Welcome back, and a happy new year to you too!

  • Yvhes P. on Jan 5, 2012

    seems like you had a wonderful break. welcome back =)

  • straw1979 on Jan 5, 2012

    nice glad you are home

  • Martin Kloess on Jan 5, 2012

    very good

  • Lady Sunshine on Jan 6, 2012

    There is no place like home. Happy 2012!

  • LadyElena on Jan 8, 2012

    Indeed – there is no place like home…. even if you are staying in a 5star hotel, after a few day, you want your own bed.

    Best Wishes.

  • LadyElena on Jan 8, 2012

    *after a few days…

  • Razorwind on Jan 8, 2012

    No place like home. That’ll always be true.

  • Razorwind on Jan 8, 2012

    No place like home. That will always be true.

  • ittech on Jan 9, 2012

    GR8 presentation

  • erwinkennythomas on Jan 9, 2012

    v. good

  • Lynn Hollis on Jan 11, 2012

    Thanks friends for your comments.
    Philly Dreamer: I didn\’t go to a sunshine state this time like mentioned in the poem, but to Seattle, WA, a vibrant city with plenty of entertainment, distractions and attractions — yet I still was longing for home after a little while and as Lady Elena said above, for my own bed in my own house. I guess I am not a world traveler.

  • nita kusuma dewi on Jan 12, 2012

    nice article

  • Phoenix Montoya on Jan 25, 2012

    Liked it. I have a poem with the similar title. I was inspired by the title when I was still working out of town. In my place, it rains a lot and whener I wait for my ride I find anticipation of going home – to kiss my kids, to feel their hugs and hear their voices. Now, that’s priceless.

    Again, a lovely poem, thanks.

  • Phoenix Montoya on Jan 25, 2012

    Liked it. I have a poem with the similar title. I was inspired by the title when I was still working out of town. In my place, it rains a lot and whener I wait for my ride I find anticipation of going home – to kiss my kids, to feel their hugs and hear their voices. Now, that’s priceless.

    Again, a lovely poem, thanks.

  • Phoenix Montoya on Jan 25, 2012

    Liked it. I have a poem with the similar title. I was inspired by the title when I was still working out of town. In my place, it rains a lot and whener I wait for my ride I find anticipation of going home – to kiss my kids, to feel their hugs and hear their voices. Now, that\’s priceless.

    Again, a lovely poem, thanks.

  • Phoenix Montoya on Jan 25, 2012

    Liked it. I have a poem with the similar title. I was inspired by the title when I was still working out of town. In my place, it rains a lot and whenever I wait for my ride I find anticipation of going home – to kiss my kids, to feel their hugs and hear their voices. Now, that’s priceless.

    Again, a lovely poem, thanks.

  • FX777222999 on Jan 26, 2012

    Nice poem with great theme…home.

  • dodolbete on Feb 21, 2012

    Indeed that’s why I quit LOL ^,^ Nice poem

  • Melody SJAL on Mar 4, 2012

    Home sweet home indeed.

  • Safa on May 4, 2012

    Very nice poem :)

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