Commitment ~ A Haiku.


when we walked the aisle
and exchanged our vows we knew
roses have thorns too


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  • carissimi on Aug 19, 2010

    so much in so little words.. and leaves the reader thinking.. great post!

  • papaleng on Aug 20, 2010

    You have delivered your message in such short verses.

  • Likha on Aug 20, 2010

    So deep is the message of this haiku and you captured it in such short lines. Great pic too.

  • Brewed Coffee on Aug 20, 2010

    That’s profound!

  • Christine Ramsay on Aug 22, 2010

    How right you are. Hopefully there are more petals than thorns. A good piece.

    Christine

  • Joseph Scott on Aug 25, 2010

    Perfect description!

  • sandcastle on Aug 31, 2010

    Thank you guys for taking the time to leave your valuable comments. Thanks for being such an inspiration.

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