Commitment ~ A Haiku.
when we walked the aisleand exchanged our vows we knewroses have thorns too
so much in so little words.. and leaves the reader thinking.. great post!
You have delivered your message in such short verses.
So deep is the message of this haiku and you captured it in such short lines. Great pic too.
That’s profound!
How right you are. Hopefully there are more petals than thorns. A good piece.
Christine
Perfect description!
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