I am to share my comments, I had made here, in stead of posting them there, where they ought to be.

Would you please see
My simple comments  for them
Ever since you have sported,
Your youth full face,
I can now imagine,
That the ruins,
Must have had a stand,
Standing all the while,
Through the sands of time.
I wish then,
I were,
What you would think,
I would’ve be,
‘Twas with you.
My everlasting message,
To all mankind is two fold. First is,
Share,
Whatever you know. Second is, Gift, Donate Be it a penny,
Or knowledge.
The third
You give me more honors. Than I do deserve, Your comments for my life, I shall preserve. It’s the greatness of the reader, who can acknowledge, the worth of another, You are greater, Much greater you are a positive human being, A natural born,
Creator.
Your greatness abounds aplenty,
I wish you many more success
In life. As one who acknowledges, Is much better, Than one who simply sulks, Or ignores.
I kneel before thee. I know since you acknowledge me, You are much better, Than any one else can be. Including me.
Not going anywhere. Here I stay always, As long as you read me I know and you know too You please me.



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