Love is utterly addictive.

I’m a mess and I can’t help it,
but I can’t say no to you.
For you I sweat,
with every move you make.
I can’t stop staring,
every part a dream.
Your arms – my sanctuary, 
just feeling you there,
it’s ecstacy.
The only drug I make a habit,
you induce this perfect feeling,
always wanting more,
it’s a dependency,
probably unhealthy,
but it’s where I want to be.

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  • rutherfranc on Jan 27, 2009

    very passionate!

  • Guffin Mopes on Jan 27, 2009

    Wow, very intense.

  • Debra. on Jan 27, 2009

    A strong and passionate piece. A very well written poem.

    God bless, Casey!

  • spiritwalker on Jan 27, 2009

    I like this..and I feel this way sooo often.

  • denus on Jan 28, 2009

    a truly excellent piece

  • Morgana on Feb 3, 2009

    O wow I really know this feeling..excellent work.

  • Willy K on Feb 5, 2009

    Good Stuff

  • Jane on Feb 21, 2009

    i like it.. good metafores and interesting imagery.

    :]

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