This poem was a request to why brothers are conceited, this is my take on the matter,( by the way, this not me) LOL.

Conceited Brother

Why do we as men, have to prove we’re so fly

As if we’re Gods Gift to a woman, I often wonder why

Instead of being that good and faithful and true guy

To the point , some of us have to lie

Ladies, I know some men only care about themselves and have that mentality, What can a woman, do for me

Not thinking that, one day…the one you trying to grind, wants a family

As we stand there, with our tired one liners, trying to be the man

As she picks up on your attitude, the whole time demoting you, to friend

The club scene has got this brothers, nose wide open

While some of our ladies, try everything to stroke his ego, hoping

That it would be her, going home with him tonight

Because of the top that she wore, and the pants, that fit so tight

My conceited brothers, stop the selfishness, that goes along with pride

Thinking only of yourselves, and being in that frame of mind

Afraid she won’t like you, for who you are

Cause you think she’s not feeling you, so you lied

Sitting here trying to figure it out, but……puzzled

I still wonder why

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