This is a poem about the madness and primitiveness that comes with a heavy metal concert. Enjoy.

Sweating bodies pumping with adrenaline and hormones. The air thick with screams, deep growls, electrified with insanity. The smell of alcohol and concession foods permiate clothes and stink up wet mouths. The guitar on stage screaming with ecstasy as the bass sends pounding waves throughout the stage and theater. The night sky makes the crowd and concert look like secluded madness only meant for certain ears, the only ones who can understandthe deeper meaning behind this apocalypse. Men roar and growl, women scream and whoop. The vocalist sends out a throaty scream that sends the crowd into chaos. Everyone leaves their seats and runs to the front. The dummer, oblivious to the potential catasrophy,  slams the bass bedal in rapid successions, making hearts pound out of chests, minds break through their conformed walls and bodies let loose to primitive needs. You, with your heightened sense of empathy, start to become overwhelmed by all the sensations and primitive needs spiking through your blood. You can feel a twisted grin stretch across your face and eyes darken in the night. True nature surfacing. You look for the only person that makes you burn The only one capable of turning your body into licks of flame. You see him and, in the middle of a deep verse and screaming solo, head over to him and claim his mouth in a hotter passion than either of you have ever experienced. You crave this man, wanting to eat him alive, make him completely yours. “Let the fire consume me…” That lyric streaks through your mind as you look deep into your man’s eyes, expressing the insanity that you feel. Once you finish attacking his mouth with feverish intent, Your hands go underneath his shirt and set his skin on fire with your fingers. The only thing you feel is the heat, the primitiveness, the blissful sensations surrounding you.
Everything else doesn’t matter. Oblivious and with a mind consumed with fire, darkness, and a thick mixture of lust, passion, and love.
You go on your knees and send the only one you crave into an impossible oblivion. Your mouth wet, hot, and strong, you give him the experience of a lifetime. The band goes into another growling verse and you feel darkness continue to rise strongly in you. You look up into the eyes of the only one you will ever love this deeply and show them the insanity that will always be there. The dark, hot, all-consuming insanity that is released by the demanding sounds of madness and anger. You finish, satisfied, take a swig of whatever drink you have, and press your love’s body close to yours, running your fingers through his hair asyou send the last bit of passion and secret hatred for the world into his mouth and across his lips. With the music and energy still pumping around you and him, you smile and embrace him as the fire recedes into your heart, where it belongs.

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