How the love of my life makes me feel.

I wait for my love to arrive,
his intoxicating scent arouses my senses.
I long just to see his warm smile and entrancing stare.
His beauty sheds light into the deepest caverns of my heart.
A subtle embrace can never suffice my yearning to be in his arms,
during the moments of joy and pain.
The dept and magnitude of his love resides in my mind long after his presence has faded.
The aura of his likeness embeds its self in my mind as I lay down to sleep.
The lonesome night bring somber memories yet to be made.
How long does this wait plague me,
till I finally rest my eyes on him.
Moments shared over a phone,
echo in the eternal realm of a my spirit,
As I wait to engulf him in my passion.

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  • jooles1302 on Feb 8, 2009

    Wow, this is quite intense. Must be quite a guy. I really like this.

  • V Frost on Feb 8, 2009

    Very good peice of poetry!!

  • Christine Ramsay on Feb 8, 2009

    Such a romantic piece, beautifully written. Well done.

    Christine

  • CHAN LEE PENG on Feb 8, 2009

    Love your poem, Linda!

  • nobert soloria bermosa on Feb 8, 2009

    what a lovely sentiment

  • CutestPrincess on Feb 8, 2009

    Nicely done. lovely poem!

  • Kim Buck on Feb 8, 2009

    “Engulf in my passion”…very hot!

  • gianne on Feb 8, 2009

    Makes me feel the intensity that good love can bring. It’s beautiful…

  • AC Hamilton III on Feb 8, 2009

    Very, very nice…loved that burning passion. You go lindalulu.

    AC

  • Inna Tysoe on Feb 8, 2009

    Well done.

    Inna

  • Kate Smedley on Feb 9, 2009

    Beautiful poem, so heartfelt, I love the words.

  • Glynis Smy on Feb 9, 2009

    I enjoyed this.

  • Lindsay Dean on Feb 9, 2009

    Very passionate!

  • hfj on Feb 10, 2009

    Nice poem. Sounds to me like you are both lucky. Well done.

  • Reilley on Feb 13, 2009

    Can’t believe I missed this one. Great stuff.

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