Confused ..

Collette Edwards on Aug 29, 2009

Tags: clue, confused, Empty, feelings, goodbye, heart, love, shock, unfair, warning, Wrong

Poem.

Inside I’m feeling empty,
My heart has gone astray.
My mind is lost in confusion,
The one that I love left me today.
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He said he dosen’t love me,
He said he dosen’t care.
He just reached in ripped out my heart,
Now I sit in shock and stare.
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He never gave any warning.
I never had a clue.
What was it that I did so wrong?
I realy wish i knew…
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Last night he held me close,
He looked deep into my eyes,
We made sweet love in the night,
Today he says Goodbye !!
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How could he just stop loving me?
How could he no longer care?
Last night he told me he loved me.
How can life be so unfair?

~Collette~
©Copyright 05-29-02

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ken bultman on Aug 29, 2009
Life, except for circumstances. Well written poem of questions.
alc on Aug 29, 2009
Love this poem makes me think!!
Darla Cooke on Aug 29, 2009
Very sad and emotional.
Marie Milton on Aug 29, 2009
As above, As below…Life can be unfair and I know this to the first degree. I know it’s hard to think at the time but if we remember that tomorrow is another day then we should “not cry cause it’s over – smile because it happened” : )
Emma Green on Aug 29, 2009
A great write, really led me in.
Lady Sunshine on Aug 29, 2009
Life can really suck…well written piece, crappy situation.
ducroisjosef on Aug 30, 2009
So many men are scandalous in the way they use women, and girls. Women use men too, but it’s no where near us ugly. Very good poem, heartbreaking.
Yvonne K on Aug 30, 2009
well done

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