A rhyme of confusion.

This has no theme

I had a strange dream

I was trapped in a hot bowl of old shaving cream

If you can read between lines

than what the hell does that mean

a long hot shower but i was 16

I once had a dog

that chased a cat down the street

and barked every morning to the garbage truck beep

The sky looks strange and the waters seems deep

I see pretty people but only when I’m sleep

My head hurts daily, but I smile for the kids

the pain is overbearing from the drugs that we did

more building more money

in the land of milk & honey

If I said the sky was falling

would you call me a dummy

I just love it when its sunny

But I slumber in the dark

I can allways see the danger

sitting quiet in the park

I think I’m Crazy

I know I’m lazy

or at least thats what society

says about me?

An under achiever, story believer

Addicted to sex, government breeder

speaking to young, screaming to old

thoughts of confusion

Or so I’ve been told.

 

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  • chennysan on May 11, 2011

    like the way you have maintained the rhyme

  • Tiki33 on May 11, 2011

    There goes the rhyming melodies. You got rhyming game down pack. Thanks for sharing another with your readers.

  • Melinda J on May 12, 2011

    Hmm? I felt your confusion here. Thanks for sharing.

  • Leonardo da Vinci E. on May 15, 2011

    Just living freedom.

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