It will take a lifetime to work it out, even then you might not be right.

It is confusing

A woman is like a very intricate jigsaw

Some pieces look as though they fit

But when you go to place them, they are the wrong

Bits you try to put into the space close and might not be far out

Unfortunately, they still are the wrong bits

Therefore, you wonder how you can ever get it right

You would be mistaken if you think you can go back to the start

Return to the beginning without a forfeit

There is always a price to pay

That is when it really gets confusing

It is also the dangerous time

Every move on the eggshells of uncertainty

Just one wrong move, one slip

That is when you know it will be remembered

Repayment will be long

More than likely for an eternity

Still

They are worth all this and more

To have the beauty you need

The one you cannot do without

Forget about pleading the fifth

Only tender love and care will calm the storm

So, make your mistakes

Making up for them by showing your love

Asking for forgiveness

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  • AlexiaJ on Feb 1, 2011

    Amazing! You have deep beautiful thoughts and you express them in a very refined manner! Its a pleasure to read your work.

  • Mystical Whitewolf on Feb 1, 2011

    Is this not why the book was written ‘Woman are from Venus, Men are from Mars…. lol
    Beautiful poem could not help but tease you a bit..

  • anndavey650 on Feb 1, 2011

    What all gooey and in love this morning and now in the dog house? Eep. *grins*

  • Wizard Brown on Feb 1, 2011

    hahaha so so sos true!

  • Michal Dorcak on Feb 1, 2011

    Good poem.

  • lapasan on Feb 2, 2011

    Sometimes a love and a woman are confusing.

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