Consume Me

LOVELYHONEY on Dec 5, 2009

Consume me is a thought of how thirsty two lovers could be when they have satyed away for long.

Consume me as you come

After along while

I know you are thirsty

Consume me to the brink

Of the life’s edge

I know you want me

Consume me

For the flavours I present

Consume me to all ends

And when you feel

You have consumed me enough

You may then consummate

With me my love

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Comments (6)

sihana on Dec 5, 2009
I like this poem – it is straightforward so that even I could understand and feel it. Keep up the good job, and God bless.
Darla Cooke on Dec 5, 2009
Very nice poem.
K.Reshma on Dec 5, 2009
Nice one
Judi Eddy on Dec 5, 2009
In your words gr8888888 Judi x
speckledlily on Dec 5, 2009
Very true! I had experienced this.

Thanks.
Faith Hodge on Dec 27, 2009
Good poem.

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