Continuity

wonder on Sep 19, 2011

Tags: million, Stars, story, Sunset, thousand

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A poem.

The sun sets to usher

a million stars

its peers.

My story ends, only to begin

a thousand stories

lined with mirth and tears.

Waves recede, and return

as they relentlessly flow

down the years.

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Comments (17)

Sunjhini on Sep 19, 2011
loved the imagery… beautiful write
FX777222999 on Sep 19, 2011
Beautiful and lovely…sounds a long journey for you..
Saurav Banerjee on Sep 19, 2011
Very well expressed thoughts.
The Silver Phoenix on Sep 19, 2011
simply, soft and beautiful. it felt like a dream when read and one that should be lived out completely. thanks for sharing.
Suni51 on Sep 19, 2011
Beautiful. really beautiful
Suni51 on Sep 19, 2011
really a sweet one, lovely.
galore on Sep 19, 2011
Hopeful one
Starpisces on Sep 19, 2011
another wonderful poem.
Raj the Tora on Sep 19, 2011
Excellent here. Every ending gives way to many new beginnings. True
Rosettaartist1 on Sep 19, 2011
good imagery
Christine Ramsay on Sep 19, 2011
Beautifully expressed words. Life is a never ending circle.
Dreamy777 on Sep 19, 2011
nice work
SharifaMcFarlane on Sep 19, 2011
Expressive poem Wonder
erwinkennythomas on Sep 19, 2011
moving!
Eunice Tan on Sep 19, 2011
Beautifully said. I like it
Martin Kloess on Sep 20, 2011
very good..
CA Johnson on Sep 21, 2011
Your poem was really beautiful.

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