I have noticed so many teenage girls seem to fall victims to abusive boyfriends. Generally some of the young males tend to lure them into their den and take control of there young lives before they even get the chance to mature.I think this is a wake up call for all young girls to take heed of this warning. More and more of our young men seem to be using the benefit system through using young girls to gain a meal ticket and a roof over their heads for there lives.

I cannot comprehend
How some young girls
Continue to be a breeding machine
And a meal ticket
For their unruley boyfriends life
Do they not see
Beyond this unreal love
Do they not see
The abuse of their human anathomy
To carve the mind
Only to become controlled
And do as they’re told
Well let this be a warning
To all young girls out there!
Know there will always be
Deceit in your lovers mind
He will not be thinking kind
There are those who want to abuse
Those who only want to use
Why!…. Some of them are lazy
Some of them are just crazy
Learn before you give yourself fully
Know that he is just another bully
If his guy continues to persist
Then I would take the first exit!

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Comments (17)
  • Ramalingam on Aug 2, 2009

    An eye opener for teenage girls.Nice.Thanks for sharing.

  • rajeev bhargava on Aug 2, 2009

    very good advice for teenage girls. i agree 100% with you. well done!

  • Kairos on Aug 2, 2009

    now another feminist…thank God.

  • Darla Cooke on Aug 2, 2009

    Great advice for all teenage girls.

  • xoxo on Aug 2, 2009

    Wonderful flow. All teenage girls should read this.

  • papaleng on Aug 2, 2009

    a good article with a great message!

  • clafleur on Aug 2, 2009

    good advice 4 a teen, but its a shame that so many have to find out the hard way.

  • TjRockin on Aug 2, 2009

    Yes, someone finally. I hate all these freakin abusers. I would NEVER abuse my girlfriend.

  • George W Whitehead on Aug 2, 2009

    Nicely put, Suzan.

  • Paul Roberts on Aug 2, 2009

    Where there is weakness there is a predator, be it male or female, each has the ability to kill. Great words of advice for both. Friend, fan, smile

  • Kip Spleen on Aug 3, 2009

    Compelling stuff here, keep writing!

  • WILLI on Aug 6, 2009

    SO TRUE! MORE COMMON THAN ONE MIGHT CONSIDER POSSIBLE… AS A FATHER OF EIGHT-4 OF WHICH ARE GIRLS- I WORRY CONSTANTLY ABOUT THEIR WELFARE. IF THEY COULD JUST SEE THE EVIL IN TEENAGE GLAMOR THEN I COULD RELAX, SOME. VERY NICE! I WILL HAVE THE OLDER ONES READ THIS AND HAVE A DISCUSSION ABOUT IT BEFORE IT IS TOO LATE. THANK YOU.

  • ducroisjosef on Aug 30, 2009

    Many boys, and men, use girls with no regard to how it changes them. It’s tragic when you see this girl that you’ve know from the time when she was little, having been used and thrown aside, loose that trusting way that they love. It breaks my heart totally, every time I see it. Very good write.

  • Zappy on Aug 31, 2009

    I hope you have reached at least one troubled teen, hopefully enough of them for your message to count!

  • mrinali on Sep 7, 2009

    good contribution for teens…

  • Joe Poniatowski on Sep 15, 2009

    Excellent commentary and insight.

  • Will Gray on Oct 10, 2009

    I will never understand it, either. It must be because of ignorance of the long-term problems and a lack of self -respect. I am not sure. but I hate the fact that it happens way too often every single day.

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