Cool Breezy Fall Day

Darla Cooke on Nov 15, 2009

Tags: autumn, autumn leaves, Fall Foliage, Haiku, season

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Cool breezy Fall day

Leaves fluttering to the ground

Blanketing the grass

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Comments (14)

ken bultman on Nov 15, 2009
Mighty fine description of autumn put into haiku style.
Hansika on Nov 15, 2009
nice one…
cutedrishti8 on Nov 15, 2009
Great 3 lines
Goodselfme on Nov 15, 2009
Well done Haiku.
Christine Ramsay on Nov 15, 2009
A beautiful description of Autumn.

Christine
Themax on Nov 15, 2009
beautiful description,Thanks for sharing
Teves on Nov 15, 2009
Excellent…
LOVELYHONEY on Nov 15, 2009
cool
LOVELYHONEY on Nov 15, 2009
just read it second time wow wow
Tanya Wallace on Nov 15, 2009
Wonderful usage of words, creating a crisp visual!!Fantastic Haiku!
Milton H Peebles III on Nov 15, 2009
This described the day we had here today.
Take Care, DreamSweet and let Your Heart Shine
~ milty
STEVE666 on Nov 16, 2009
Nice one, Darla.
diamondpoet on Nov 16, 2009
I was looking around at all the beautiful tree and I just had to smile. Nice piece.
CutestPrincess on Dec 6, 2009
beautiful haiku… i love the picture…

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