Cool Dudes

Ruby Hawk on Jul 5, 2007

Tags: brains, Cool, dudes, In My Eyes

My grandsons are cool dudes.

These cool grandsons of mine are super fine
They weren’t standing behind the door
When the brains were passed out
They can go as far as their spirits can see
They can have the whole world on its knees
And if by some chance they should lose their sight
My face will still be made brighter by their eyes.

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Darlene on Jul 5, 2007
From one grandmother to another. There is a lot of meaning in those few words.
Lucy Lockett on Jul 7, 2007
Have they seen this poem? They would be proud!
Susan on Jul 7, 2007
A wonderful grandmother you must be.
Randy on Jul 7, 2007
These guys sound real cool. I envy them their grandmother.
Ruby Hawk on Jul 7, 2007
Thank all of you for your kind comments. I appreciate it.
Angie Ferrell on Jul 8, 2007
I like this poem so much.
Ruby Hawk on Jul 8, 2007
just to say two of these grandsons are in the Army. One is serving his second tour in Iraq at this time. The other came home from Iraq last Xmas and is now at Fort Hood.You have been so kind I wanted you to have an update.
Randy on Aug 11, 2007
Thanks for the update. Good luck to both your heros.
Freda Dickinson on Sep 13, 2007
Thank your two soldier boys for all of us. We are in their debt forever.

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