It takes two to tango, love the one you love. Cooperate and all ends well.

Once I glanced
At the face of my boo
He’s such a Pharisee at first
But as we move on
I see a Samaritan’s quest
I love the rock
That puts me atop
When he lather me
On his optimal hands
As his being empowering

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  • nobert soloria bermosa on Jul 27, 2008

    nice poem,that’s real love

  • arnel de guzman on Jul 27, 2008

    when you really someone, no matter what’s her character or personality, you tend to fight for it…

  • lorie cruz on Jul 28, 2008

    yup, i agree, cooperate and all ends well, go girl!

  • clarice on Jul 28, 2008

    thanks for all the comments, i appreciated it so much. luvs bakit ala ka pa comment? this is for you……

  • nelson fernandez on Jul 28, 2008

    gawin daw ba kong ermitanyo este samaritano,hahahaha,luv you!

  • joe mar nagano on Jul 30, 2008

    dear,frend clariss….
    madame po ako prob eh… joke….sana more more blessings ah…………

    wow,,,,,,ang GANDA aman ma’am pero sa totoo nd ako na touch . . .huhuhu jowk ang ganda nga eh……kaya lang nd ko naintindihan…..sana sa susunod tagalog nalang kasi nosebleed kasi ako eh…..pero kahit ganun go suportahan taka sa hilig nio ma’am…..habang nandito po kami sa mambangnan high school …laging tandaan ang buhay ay weather weather lang……huhuhu asus….sana sa susunod wheel of fortune aman kasi suya sa game ka na ba hindi ko alam ang mga tanong….o kaya naman po sa gogogo binggo nalang…panu ba yan ma’am medyo my kaiksian ang comment ko pero dont wory sa nxtym dagdagan ko pa……how sweet and prety nio kasi ma’am kaya lage ako comment sa inyo……..hay naku…..always take care ah…..xoxoxo…………..
    nagmamahal:
    JOE MAR NAGANO.

  • JOE MAR NAGANO on Jul 30, 2008

    ………………WASHUNG…………………….ETO ULIT AKO WAHHHHHHHb ……paulit ulit lang…………hi naku ma’am takot ako kasi may mga kidlat patay ko na com …baka masira

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