People react differently to grieving people.

A loved one dying is not a disease

there is no need to tiptoe around me

Either is it appropriate to push me

It is best to leave me be

Some people even like to attack

They hope to be the one to make me crack

Or even worse want to see me break

so they try and tenderise me like a steak

They want their lion’s share of me

but be warned, I’ll soon be back on my feet

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  • sandie on Aug 13, 2009

    its one of them situations where you dont know what to say to people once they have passed over, its very difficult, good poem.

  • sandie on Aug 13, 2009

    its one of them situations where you dont know what to say to people once they have passed over, its very difficult, good poem.

  • Engel15 on Aug 13, 2009

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