Could Have Been

CutestPrincess on Mar 4, 2009

Tags: could have been, love, poem, Poetry, You and Me

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You could have been here beside me…

it could have been us

if you just waited

it could have been us

but everything’s wasted

everytime i look back

i blame myself

‘coz if i just said yes

then you wouldn’t be with someone else

it could have been you and me

but i guess it will never be

i should have been happy

You could have been here beside me…

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Kate Smedley on Mar 4, 2009
Lovely heartfelt poem
Anne McNew on Mar 4, 2009
what a beautiful poem..
stephencardiff on Mar 4, 2009
If only… I like it good work
dee gold on Mar 4, 2009
nice one
Christine Ramsay on Mar 4, 2009
A sad and heart rending poem. We can always have chosen differently with hindsight.

Christine
gianne on Mar 4, 2009
This is truly bittersweet.
Adam Henry Sears on Mar 4, 2009
Hi, Julie Ann, how are you?
The message here is sad yet reflective, personal yet worthy of being a message. I understand the feelings that can come about when you wonder ‘what if’. I think you are strong enough to let it go and move on. Thanks for sharing.
By the way,… don’t forget to punctuate.
Mythili Kannan on Mar 4, 2009
\”Miss You\” feeling is well shown….
Lee Altman on Mar 4, 2009
excellent poem and please try not hang on to the past it can drive you crazy and you might miss out on another Mr. Right
Tatsiana on Mar 4, 2009
Very nice poem… Makes me sad though..
M A Bhanpurwala on Mar 4, 2009
beautiful poem
MJpatrick on Mar 4, 2009
very heartfelt one!
Alicia Wind on Mar 4, 2009
Aww…full of longings and loss , somewhat regrets….
poetryqueen on Mar 4, 2009
A very sweet, heart-warming poem but yet so powerful. Great job!
Likha on Mar 9, 2009
One poem that makes for a good song. A heart-filled piece.

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