A closed bloom.

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A demure flower
Gently closes her petals
Waiting for her sun

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  • Starpisces on May 13, 2011

    lovely haiku.
    ;)

  • CA Johnson on May 13, 2011

    I really enjoyed your haiku.

  • Stable on May 14, 2011

    Another great haiku with a double meaning?! Keep up the good work!

  • Erin Miller on May 14, 2011

    ;) Great work here!

  • Shirley Shuler on May 15, 2011

    Hi Lady Sunshine, another beautiful haiku.

  • Coleen Hazeldine on May 16, 2011

    Double meaning. Ooh I like that. lol

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