Description of written crayons.

Crusty and waxy

Hazy and dark

Dare you to touch it

Your fingers will mark

The disgusting flavor

Of magenta or muave

The secrets and stealthy

Moving as suave

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  • Person on Jun 30, 2009

    I LOVE IT!! You my friend are very original. The topics you come up with are sooooooooooo original and some authors might think that they would never work but you make them work. Good job the only thing I could say is dont let you rhyme pattern keep you from saying what you wanna say. I feel like you want to tell your reader more. If it doesnt rhyme then who cares just let your message be heard. Let me know if you like my advice cause I have got plenty more of it. You could be a great writter if you stick with it . Keep Writting :)

  • spoontablechair on Jul 3, 2009

    I randomly picked this out from the list. If this is representative of all of your works, then you’re on to a really good start. :) And it’s ‘mauve’, not ‘muave’. ;) Aside from that, awesome job.

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