Too much of comparisons can make one sad.

A creation is

a piece of creative energy in its grain

in its own domain;

none be compared

nor contested

coloured words and thoughts

a vision, version unique.

Grass with its every blade

cannot aspire to be an oak

there would be no space to tread

with woods all over

a woodshed. 

Innovations also has its pitfalls

may go all wrong

yet the creative energy never goes to waste

as we deftly move along.

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  • pattiann on Apr 20, 2010

    Great poem. I think weall need to tap into our creative selves.

  • Mr Arrogant on Apr 20, 2010

    i like it

  • ken bultman on Apr 20, 2010

    Ohh…profound. Grass….cannot aspire to be an oak. Pay attention, people.

  • zoeyclark on Apr 20, 2010

    creativity rocks. It directs my world.

  • Starpisces on Apr 20, 2010

    your this poem makes me feel great, I used to compare my writing with others, now I begin to like my own style.
    yippee!
    Wonder is Wonderful.
    :)

  • diamondpoet on Apr 20, 2010

    Very profound piece, and thanks Ken we would have missed that without you.

  • diamondpoet on Apr 20, 2010

    Very profound piece, and thanks Ken without you we would have missed that.

  • giftarist on Apr 20, 2010

    Great! Smooth creativity

  • VTech on Apr 20, 2010

    Good Post

  • Tulan on Apr 20, 2010

    I love your explanation.

  • Eunice Tan on Apr 21, 2010

    Well said. Two thumbs up

  • lillyrose on Apr 21, 2010

    wonderful Wonder, we all should be happy to be who we are

  • Krupali on Apr 21, 2010

    agree with you….great….makes sense!

  • Ruby Hawk on Apr 21, 2010

    I believe it, if creativity doesn’t come out in one place it will in another.

  • simplyoj on Apr 22, 2010

    Creativity creates uniqueness in every masterpiece. Great write.

  • T. S. GARP on Apr 23, 2010

    Everything is or ever was is made from creative energy. Good write, Wonder!

  • drelayaraja on Apr 25, 2010

    Rally a creative piece…

  • CA Johnson on Apr 25, 2010

    This was a very good poem. I really liked it.

  • ShadowPsychos on May 2, 2010

    great post :)

  • MarketingYourWebsiteOnline on May 12, 2010

    Very interesting… thank you

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