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Creatures of the Night

Darla Cooke on Mar 29, 2009
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In a psychotic rage.

 

I can hear a weird growl,

coming from the eerie forest.

I’m surrounded by danger,

wicked beasts are closing in.

They are brutal and vicious,

these creatures of the night.

From the sound of their howls,

they are in a psychotic rage.

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  • rajeev bhargava on Mar 29, 2009

    i really like this poem. there is a feel of suspence in it and wjen read slowly, one actually feels surrounded by the creatures of the night in the eerie forest. simple and clear language that all can understand and relate to. brilliant.

  • revivor on Mar 29, 2009

    I agree, when read slowly it has that impact on you!!
    thanks – revivor

  • Daghost413860 on Mar 29, 2009

    Wow, where do you vacation ;) well written!

  • deehackett on Mar 29, 2009

    Read it again slowly like the first two suggested and it gave me the creeps! That is the best poetry! Stuff that makes you feel something. Well done!

  • Mr Ghaz on Mar 29, 2009

    Absolutely awesome! That was great poem and well presented. Well done and thnx 4 sharing

  • kate smedley on Mar 30, 2009

    A real eerie feel to this, you are an excellent poet Darla.

  • Brenda Nelson on Mar 30, 2009

    ah.. its just teenagers right?

  • CutestPrincess on Apr 2, 2009

    nicely written poem…

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