Simple poetry.

I was on the verge of exhilaration, 

when the moment first it striked me.

The world seemed to be a heaven,

and the people as divine angels.

My wings spread in my imaginations,

and I almost found my destination.

Uncertain of the fact,

that this feelings are just guests.

Happiness for a few days,

and drive back to their nests.

Life seemed to be a battlefield,

after a month or so,

this criminal called Love,

leaves you to the pavilion called sorrow.

At the onset it shows you paradise,

and hell in the end,

a ruinous life it makes,

that impels you to offend.

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Comments (10)
  • drelayaraja on Nov 17, 2009

    Wonderful title. Great thoughts and well put up.

  • wonder on Nov 17, 2009

    Good observation—- happening everywhere——causing pain.

  • TroostAvenue on Nov 17, 2009

    Good imagery.

  • Teves on Nov 17, 2009

    Great post…

  • simplyoj on Nov 17, 2009

    Unusual title :-D

  • Sunitha Stalin on Nov 17, 2009

    good one……..

  • AlmaG on Nov 17, 2009

    I feel this poem…

  • Hansika on Nov 17, 2009

    great share

  • svishnugopal on Nov 17, 2009

    rally awesome stuff from you..thanks

  • Sue Nuckles on Nov 18, 2009

    Another good poem. You are talented.

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