A juror struggles.

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The judge calls the court to order,

and begins his preamble,

explaining the legal arena to the jurors,

the lawyers ramble,

taking a legal gamble,

murder still carried a stench,

as the judge was quite a figure on the bench,

quiet, serious and tall,

hoping justice would not fall,

the only female juror sat in the front row,

waiting for the show,

really wasn’t sure,

as she slumped in her chair,

and stared at the floor,

a murderer sat near,

but she knew he was innocent

until proven guilty,

then she thought about it,

the murderer would sit,

and two Jewish lawyers,

would argue the question

of a black man’s freedom,

juggling,

and she would be struggling,

to find out if the legal system is real,

or did the murderer accused have enough money,

to work out a deal.

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  • Lady Sunshine on Jan 28, 2010

    Great piece, Frank. I could visualize the female juror’s mental struggle.

  • willie wondka on Jan 28, 2010

    good poem lol! x

  • clay hurtubise on Jan 28, 2010

    Interesting piece.
    Thanks,
    Clay

  • joyhyena29 on Jan 28, 2010

    great share^^

  • deep blue on Jan 28, 2010

    True indeed. Money talks and anybody who has it has the full force of the law at their disposal.

  • AlmaG on Jan 28, 2010

    Wow! I felt like I was inside the court room. Wonderful poem :)

  • standingproud on Jan 29, 2010

    Frank you do have a way with you, I was there

  • mysticdave on Jan 29, 2010

    Very descriptive, i enjoyed it…. :)

  • RS Wing on Jan 29, 2010

    “Murder still carried a stench”….I love that verse. This is like a ‘reality poem’ . Justice is bought and paid for…..and only the celebrity or wealthy will get the ‘innocent’ verdict. Like the whole piece. Great work Frank!

  • Nitin Mudgal on Jan 29, 2010

    Nice post.

  • albert1jemi on Jan 30, 2010

    excellent share

  • alensmith on Jan 30, 2010

    i really enjoyed thanks for sharing

  • alensmith on Jan 30, 2010

    lovely must say

  • devsir on Jan 30, 2010

    Very interesting. It seems you have a degree in Law.

  • mkd1788 on Jan 30, 2010

    i think you are the one part of court…that\’s you could depicted this post greatly..

  • mkd1788 on Jan 30, 2010

    i think you are the one part of court…

  • mkd1788 on Jan 30, 2010

    i think you are the part of the court…that’s why you have depicted this article greatly

  • Sammy2000 on Jan 30, 2010

    a good court drama piece

  • fishfry aka Elizabeth Figueroa on Feb 2, 2010

    Surly something to wonder about; well (played-out) written!

  • qasimdharamsy on Feb 2, 2010

    Nice piece…great work….

  • LoveDoctor on Feb 17, 2010

    Celebrity justice, by contrast is corrosive on any number of levels. In the criminal justice system, only the wealthy and black will get the innocent verdict. In other words they can hire a high profile defense team where the attorneys can persuade the jurors of defendant’s innocence. I can imagine the struggle juror faced. Guilty baby. Good work.

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