The inner most thoughts of a murderer are a mystery, this work of fiction is my vision of what a murderer sees the first time he takes a life.

I looked into her eyes,

And felt my heart come out my chest,

Child like innocence raped,

With every bated breath.

She introduced me to a world,

Where the damned,

Knew my name,

My soul was now forfeit,

To the devil’s open claim.

Panoramic images,

Clouded by miasmic shades,

When the veil was finally lifted,

My hands held the blade.

I thought I had witnessed a murder.

But murderer was my name.

With the blood of an innocent,

My hands were now crimson stained.

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Comments (6)
  • Sebastian Onciu on Jan 9, 2012

    An interesting imaginary insight into the darkness of an evil mind.

  • indianwriting on Jan 9, 2012

    thousands happen each day..with no remorse though
    :(

  • Anexis Denis on Jan 9, 2012

    This was an interesting take on a murderers viewpoint.Very well written

  • AmosTheCat on Jan 9, 2012

    Very well written. Gruesome topic, but tragically relevant to our society. Good use of imagery.

  • iva75cpb on Jan 9, 2012

    Let’s hope such visions will remain in your mind alone. :)
    Although it is very well rhymed and expressed.

  • Kristie Claar on Jan 12, 2012

    great work

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