Haiku on crisp, petals and online dating.


Haiku 1

soft petals now crisp
in between a book’s pages
faded memories


Haiku 2

crisp glass breaking sound ~
my daughter’s way
of doing dishes


Haiku 3

online dating~
his crisp photo
now blurry

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Comments (6)
  • JoeLopy on Oct 1, 2010

    Very nice.

  • giftarist on Oct 1, 2010

    Lovely compilation. Liked them all.

  • LCM Linda on Oct 1, 2010

    Nice Haiku. Particularly like the 2nd one.

  • Brewed Coffee on Oct 1, 2010

    I was amused by the 2nd one. You’ll be out of dishes and glasswares if that happens a lot LOL.

    The first one made me smile. I like doing that. But not in books. I love my books to much to stain them. :-)

  • Brewed Coffee on Oct 1, 2010

    I meant * I love my books too much*

  • Adelnica Amor R. Izon on Oct 2, 2010

    I really like your presentations^^

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