Citrus haiku.

He’s out at daybreak

The cropduster pilot and

It’s bye bye fruit fly.       

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  • Teves on Nov 19, 2009

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  • drelayaraja on Nov 19, 2009

    Nice one.

  • Patrick Bernauw on Nov 19, 2009

    Ah… great little poem! Like it!

  • Rinks Desai on Nov 19, 2009

    What a thinking …!!!!!!!!!!

  • svishnugopal on Nov 19, 2009

    tiny wonder…its fantastic…

  • abhishek40914 on Nov 19, 2009

    nice one.

  • Lord Banks on Nov 19, 2009

    A short one for you Ken but profound, enjoyed it.

  • Christine Ramsay on Nov 19, 2009

    That is a great one, Ken. I can imagine you writing that last line with a twinkle in your eye.

    Christine

  • Darla Cooke on Nov 19, 2009

    Great haiku and pic!

  • Ramalingam on Nov 19, 2009

    Sharp.

  • Phill Senters on Nov 19, 2009

    Thank you Ken. Nice picture. I used to watch when they dusted the orange groves. Probably breathed in lots of those chemicals.

  • Hello World on Nov 19, 2009

    Great haiku

    ***© Hello-World.

  • Papa Sparks on Nov 19, 2009

    You nailed it Ken!

  • K.Reshma on Nov 19, 2009

    Its Great

  • lillyrose on Nov 19, 2009

    thats sad!

  • chitragopi on Nov 19, 2009

    Profound haiku.

  • stryka66 on Nov 19, 2009

    Good one, Ken !

  • Themax on Nov 19, 2009

    very good,very nice share,Thanks :)

  • Guy Hogan on Nov 19, 2009

    In my dreams I use to fly a lot. Now I only fly once in a great while; but any time I do it’s always a dream that makes me feel good.

  • Goodselfme on Nov 19, 2009

    Good Haiku!

  • PR Mace on Nov 19, 2009

    Good one, Ken we have to keep those oranges coming.

  • Ruby Hawk on Nov 19, 2009

    I have a friend who has told me some tales about those crop dusters.

  • Tanya Wallace on Nov 19, 2009

    lmao,this is the best humorous haiku I have ever read.Just like a big instant fly swatter! You my friend have one very clever mind!

  • TheStayAtHome on Nov 19, 2009

    it was short, but it explained many views..

    great read!

  • deep blue on Nov 19, 2009

    I suppose it’s a Grumman Ag Cat. The only cat I knew that flies and brings down the flies. Nice haiku Ken.

  • LoveDoctor on Nov 20, 2009

    Nice haiku

  • Lady Sunshine on Nov 20, 2009

    lol…poor fruit fly.

  • wonder on Nov 24, 2009

    A sweet one and it is very creative.

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