Citrus haiku.
He’s out at daybreak
The cropduster pilot and
It’s bye bye fruit fly.
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Nice one.
Ah… great little poem! Like it!
What a thinking …!!!!!!!!!!
tiny wonder…its fantastic…
nice one.
A short one for you Ken but profound, enjoyed it.
That is a great one, Ken. I can imagine you writing that last line with a twinkle in your eye.
Christine
Great haiku and pic!
Sharp.
Thank you Ken. Nice picture. I used to watch when they dusted the orange groves. Probably breathed in lots of those chemicals.
Great haiku
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You nailed it Ken!
Its Great
thats sad!
Profound haiku.
Good one, Ken !
very good,very nice share,Thanks
In my dreams I use to fly a lot. Now I only fly once in a great while; but any time I do it’s always a dream that makes me feel good.
Good Haiku!
Good one, Ken we have to keep those oranges coming.
I have a friend who has told me some tales about those crop dusters.
lmao,this is the best humorous haiku I have ever read.Just like a big instant fly swatter! You my friend have one very clever mind!
it was short, but it explained many views..
great read!
I suppose it’s a Grumman Ag Cat. The only cat I knew that flies and brings down the flies. Nice haiku Ken.
Nice haiku
lol…poor fruit fly.
A sweet one and it is very creative.
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