Things are never what they seem.

 I have lost all my mind, i cant figure out what to do or what path to take,
 I try and try but I get nowhere.  I push and push but I gain no ground,
                I scream but nobody hears what i say……… I have lost my way.

 In my eyes I see the truth but it only matters to me,
 I try to explain but it blurs my meaning I try to move on but I am grounded in the past.
               I am chained to a mistake that has come and gone…….. but I am still wrong

  I search for salvation, I sacrifice my way, I walk a lonely road where I am destined to stay.
 I crave a brother, a friend, an ally. I need I need but nobody gives a care……..So i sit and stare

  I am bleeding and burning, my soul has caught fire, the flames of my hope grow further and higher,
 I am seeking an exit I am running away, I dont choose my own actions…………. I only obey

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Comments (5)
  • Rose on Nov 13, 2008

    Sounds very sad and lonely! Nice writing!

  • Brandt on Nov 14, 2008

    Nice work!

  • amy on Nov 14, 2008

    nice work yet again. I think my husband can relate to this

  • Lauren A on Nov 14, 2008

    The words are jagged like you have some torn emotions. Well done

  • Poetic Enigma on Jun 4, 2009

    I like how you put your words in this piece,
    Very different, I like!

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